All Comments on 'A Ghoul, A Nectarine, and Pancakes'

Thank you for the story! Hot, hot, hot!

That this story does not yet have an H next to it? Great writing, good plot, hot sex. Lovely! Thanks for an awesome read.

Thank you for your lovely compliment, hopkinscm. Because I'm a giant dork, I've been following my votes all morning...and early on, someone rated this story with a "1". To all my readers: of course, if you feel this story deserves a poor score, that is your choice...but as a writer working on honing my craft, I would very much appreciate knowing why! Thanks to all :)

he protected her. he gave her what she wanted and kept her safe. thank you

Whoever voted this story a 1 is either a troll or an idiot. This is a very hot story. And I believe you made the right choice in classifying it as romance. Really well done.

Hot. Please say this will be a BDSM series.

The title seemed somewhat odd before I read it, but you wove it into story very well. Really enjoyed your description of their sexual encounter.

This is the kind of Literotica story I like, whether it be BDSM, Romance, or any other. She belongs to him, but he also belongs to her. Above all else, first and foremost, is the physical and emotional care of each other.

That's so hot ... surely Hell's temp is tropical in comparison...