It is quite interesting. I would like to readwhat happens next
Please continue the story. So what will she say or do?
very erotic. believable too.
The author is correct. This was unbelievable.
good story more
We readers, like your character, would definitely like to know what happens when little sis gets home again.????
Liked the premise - being perved by your sister. Too short though. Needed some additional detail about the event and the sister's description...
Very hot, but feels like just a teaser or promote before the real story gets started. I hope I'm right and that you have more to come in this story.
You have a good imagination too. Just another teenage dream of being hung like a horse and being the high school stud.
I like your use of description. Though some readers may want more, I appreciate how you left things up to imagination. The story was short, but very well done for your first dip in the waters. I hope to read more from you in the future.
It's great when a kid sister finds out about boys--how they're built between their legs, what it looks like when they unload their young balls in a huge geyser of creamy sperm--from her own big brother. The next step is for the brother to bust his baby sister's cherry and shoot his sperm up her cute little twat. Busting their sister's cherry should be the official duty of all big brothers.
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