All Comments on 'Vampire Vacation'

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LechemanLechemanover 11 years ago
Good Story - Non Human Category Better

This story was good and I did enjoy it although I am thinking it would have gone better in the Non Human category. The mind control element was only briefly introduced at the very end and it could be argued that it was more a hypnotic suggestion than the more typical mind control stories here.

Anyway I've given you the 'bells and whistles' as I did enjoy the story nonetheless.

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