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by Erotonaut11/19/12

Putting out fire with gasoline

Good job Taylor and Dean got a ride with Bethany before the industry ground her down. Weird that she should choose to adopt Taylor's first name for her XXX work.

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by GC6611/19/12

Thank you, Erotonaut

It's not odd at all, really. It was a deliberate plot twist inspired by two of the greatest plot twists in movie history: the end scene of Planet of the Apes and Darth Vader revealing he's actually Luke's father in The Empire Strikes Back. It was based partly on my own history, but I wrote the story around the plot twist and added fictional elements.

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