All Comments on 'More Than Words Ch. 03'

good story but vry less depth to the characters............................................

I'm just an old hillbilly but I tried to understand it (fat chance). But it was a great story 5 stars all the way.

Thank you for this story. Beautifully written and wonderfully compelling, I couldn't tear myself away from it even if I wanted to. And I am very glad to see you have many more stories I can enjoy XD

Turning out to be the hidden master is tear-jerking, but fun!

I didn’t much care for this story, I really didn’t get the point of it. Seems like sword fighting went out of style pretty shortly after the invention of personal firearms. Sure, you can kill someone with a sword, but you can kill someone with a 2 by 4 too. Doesn’t make it a better way to do it. Then again, I never liked Kung Fu movies either, I always thought they were silly.

Enjoyed the first two parts last one was disappointing, especially with how her dad died at the end.

It had potential, but it went too fast to develop the characters. I guess that’s okay since all the good guys died anyway, and now the last of the line is happily leaving for Japan with the man who killed her father. I thought she actually had emotions. Not a fan of stories where evil triumphs... Grandma got to live 17+ more years after killing Grant, killing who knows how many others along the way? Major fail in the end.

I mean, really, all that and the villains just die, no suffering or anything, just a quick swish of a sword and that’s it.

why dud sam took williams name?

sad but beautiful

5 stars