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I felt tangled in puedo-phors...run on sentences ...and even non sentences (the last)

Twelve oh's latest thread may find plenty of Meet here...

but...Some nice images

lots to contemplate...and 'bing ...and ...word check

this line i would kill for:

She cares to portray herself as the woman of his dreams but that image is an illusion to carefully distract him from understanding her need for his cradled blackness.

this so rich

Trickles of winding pain might find their way inside her empty cavity.

very unusual writing style

actually misread first line as

The wind blows a mescaline cyclone...

and immerses all who enter, TK U MLJ LV NV