All Comments on 'A New Kind of Love'

by ImSoGay

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
AMAZING!!!

This seriously is the best story I've ever read. I can't get enough of it. It's absolutely perfect! I can't wait for the next part!

DiJiTDiJiTover 11 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE!!

I don't know if you'll add another chapter (Honestly I think it was a perfect ending as it is) but I hope you will keep writing and submitting. The pace was perfect, the flow and developement was great and you made it very believeable. I gave it a five only because I couldn't give it more.

Thomas DrablézienThomas Drablézienover 11 years ago
Excellent!

A lovely piece of storytelling. Warm, passionate and romantic, a real love story. Very well done.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 11 years ago
The most beautiful...

...and lovely I've ever read. I love you both just reading it. What does that say? Thank you thank you thank you.

jpb531jpb531over 11 years ago
Wonderful

The ending was beautiful.

BurningForYouBurningForYouover 11 years ago
Loved it

The ups and downs was what made this story perfect. <3

cresslarcresslarover 11 years ago
Boring

Too damn long!

GC66GC66over 11 years ago
Wonderful!

I can relate to the ups and downs in a relationship. I'm a straight guy, but that was a very well-written story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

excellent not too long at all best story iv read in a long time could you possibly write another chapter about the wedding may be children will her mum change her mind

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 11 years ago
An emotional rollercoaster...

Written from a place of knowing well the feelings you were writing about. IMHO the story is brilliant. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Boring

Too much build up not enought sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Love it!!!!!!!! More

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great!

I really enjoyed this story. It was more about the characters than it was about the sex, eh? Well, I enjoyed that. I enjoyed the machismo of Frankie, the sort of faulty swagger. I was surprised by little things - like the drawing on the mantle, etc. great job.

BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Wow

That was awesome ! Please write part 2 soon.

idrubloodidrubloodover 11 years ago
Well done!

The characters were well put together and felt real. So too did all the emotions. The buildup made the sex that much more special. Great job and thank you for sharing.

IDB.

Winter LotusWinter Lotusover 11 years ago
Not bad.

I liked the concept of the story. I liked the emotion. I actually thought it could've been longer, the courtship was too succint for believeability. And yes, the sex was kind of boring. For a straight girl having her first lesbian encounter, I felt like it could've been sexier, more of an adventure.

The perv in me always likes more hot sex.

Want a fan of the parent situation and how short that was, and with such a definitive outcome, but it was still a good twist.

KathyFKathyFover 11 years ago
Wonderfully Different

I Really Enjoyed The Story. And I See Many

Similarities To My Own Real Life.

I'm So Glad That I Had "Cum" Out To My Parents

And Sibling @ 14 yrs Old. They Accepted Me As

Their Daughter & Sister. Though 2 Years Later They

Were Taken In A Tragic Accident.

I Still Feel That They Are With Me, And Only Want

My Happiness.

I'm So Happy That Frankie, Had The Love &

Determination - Too Try & Reunite Her "Love" With

Her Father.

LiveCatLiveCatover 11 years ago
Nice

I'm a sucker for a love story so thoroughly enjoyed this. Nice one!

BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Nice

That was a great story. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Damn...

This was one of the best story's I've read on this site!!! I love the storyline, the emotion, the realness of this story! I also like that Frankie loves Lauryn so unconditionally and only wants Lauryn to be happy no matter what she has to do to make it that way! You've made two very real and true characters who both love wholeheartedly!!! Great job and I'm REALLY hoping that there will be a second part to this story cause this first part was absolutely amazing!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good, But...

Good, but flawed in several respects.

You almost lost me right at the start. Nobody would wear that amount of diamonds out in the daytime, on their own. Maybe back in the fifties, but certainly not today.

Some of the dialogue was a tad clunky, and there were a LOT of lazy spelling mistakes, which could easily have been fixed, (saw/was , Lo/No, etc), and while this may seem harsh, bear in mind that you've made a big effort with a great story, so why then allow such niggles to annoy the reader? NEVER annoy your reader.

Overall, this was a really excellent, 5-star story, dragged down to around a 3.75 for the above points. (I'll compromise and round it up to 4)

Kim xx

BahamaBahamaabout 11 years ago
Awesome

Frickin awesome ! Please continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fantastic!

Beautiful romantic story! Keep up the great writing whether you continue this tale or go for new ones!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 11 years ago
Wonderful.

The pesky little proofreading quirks didn't stand a chance of distracting me from the extremely touching story. The last 2 pages had tears running down my face, but I couldn't stop reading. The story was absolutely wonderful. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
continue

so good.!! more ! continuation on this tale please..

missy7349missy7349almost 11 years ago
Awesome!!!!!

Great story from start to finish. I was crying along with the characters. Love and romance is a gift that everyone should enjoy but for those of us whom don't have it, need to be able to feel it from the stories of others. Thanks!!!

BugattiTBugattiTover 10 years ago
Wow

Very excellent story. Keep the good work up.

Lonely_readerLonely_readerover 10 years ago
Sweet

Such a shame it doesn't have a sequel

scarlet_1scarlet_1over 10 years ago
Beautifully Written

Good love stories are an essential part of one's existence. Thank you for writing with the emotions you have. Loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Envoy

I truly enjoyed your story! However it surprises me that you have stopped writing despite getting a stream of great reviews. Hopefully you are able to continue where you left us hanging.

Tony

adidasgaladidasgalabout 10 years ago
SWEET AND PASSIONATE

This is so BEAUTIFUL!

I am sure there are lots of people who can relate to this story, I am one of them. Real Issues, real Feelings and Emotions. The part where Frankie goes to see to see Lauren's father, brought a lump to my throat. Awesome!

** I LOVED IT **

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
LOVED IT

From beginning to end.

LezBeDomLezBeDomalmost 10 years ago
Beautiful

I loved it, it was just.. amazing. From the sex to the emotion... -wipes tear-

BurhanDangerBurhanDangeralmost 10 years ago
Great Writing

From beginning to end it was awesome . I can't say in words how good it is. One of the best love story I've ever read . Emotional and logical.

Sexy_LisaSexy_Lisaalmost 10 years ago
GREAT!

Was a very nice love story... well written loved the ending

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
omg

that moment when your pissed off bc it ends an theres no other part! please keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great story

Loved the story had to read it no stopping it was riveting please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wow

wow!! that was fucking awesome...

i hope u continue writing... BEST love story i've ever read on literotica

please write part 2

wine521wine521over 9 years ago
One of the best.

What a great story. well written and completely believable, sexy as hell to boot. Thanks

BurhanDangerBurhanDangerover 9 years ago

It is just the best story here

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Beautiful

One of the best love stories I have ever read. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
You Changed My Love Life! (:

Thank you for this story. Definitely my favorite!

I laughed, I smiled, and I cried. No other story has had

this huge effect on me. I felt every feeling there was because it reflects me, yet it teaches me more about love.

Thank you and I hope to read more of your stories :)

-Priscilla Paulino

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
You should write many more stories of this same theme since there are millions of stories

I am a very happy and confident young lesbian who has had the incredible luck to meet and eventually seduce 3 very straight, married mothers and believe me, it was an exciting adventure filled with smiles and tears. Frustration and concern. Luckily neither hurt their marriage but they seem much more grounded and comfortable. Additionally, the sex was incredible.....

You are a great writer with exceptional talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

I can honestly saw that this story is one of the greatest ones I've ever read. You have an exceptional talent for writing and should continue writing stories.

PaksdmPaksdmabout 9 years ago
one of the few...

that deserve more than 5 stars....well done - thanks!

blackash01blackash01about 9 years ago
soooo sweet and sexy

i'm glad i stuck with this story. it was very rewarding

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
A-one and five stars

You're good, Gay, a decent writer and a fine story-teller. So why have you only got two stories on this site? Go on, do us all a favour and write some more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

How dare you not write a sequel!!!!!!!! Torture I tell you, torture!!!!!! I read all of this and was like, "I love it, I need to read the sequel." Then I was like, "No sequel?" :"(

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great ending

Good story. Great ending. Do us a favor and keep writing. :)

LcnmdLcnmdover 8 years ago
It's so gay ...

I love it! Thank you so much for writing it and showing true feelings!

L

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Beautifully written

Thank you, so beautifully written & composed. Just the right depth & speed of plot, with a few little twists.

Truly excellent

gjames17gjames17about 8 years ago
Such a beautiful, touching story

The previous comment said it all. Although it's been years, please write a sequel. I'd love to read more of these two wonderful ladies as there is more to tell. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
When two people really and truly love each other

Doesnt what the two sexy ladies went through together they still found a way for their relationship to work. Which is what ppl on the whole need to do. It doesn't matter if the person is bi straight gay lesbian or a transexual, As long as two people really and truly love , they will do anything to be by each other side and stay there

Randee1958Randee1958over 7 years ago
Uplifting

I love romantic stories with visual description, of how they're partner coaxes there emotions out of them. I must tell this story had everything that one of those romance books has, with that added flair. Great story.

5💥's😍😍😍😍😍

trans_boy1776trans_boy1776over 7 years ago
Came for the plot... ;) came for the plot

You know you're reading a good story when you're talking to the characters like they're people XD Sitting on my bed like, "Lauryn, you're hella gay! Accept it and kanoodle already!"

luvandluckluvandluckover 7 years ago

I hope theres gonna be more to this story, you cant leave us hangin like this. I wanna know if she said yes to frankies marriage proposal, which i think she prob did, but id also like to know if lauryns mother is gonna come around like her father did. This was a great story though.

Trace_WatersTrace_Watersabout 7 years ago
Love and tenderness...very sexy

Thank you ImSoGay. This story is soooo lovely. I appreciate the character of these two characters. Frankie's desire and affection for Lauryn expressed in honest communication, patience, perseverance and willingness to sacrifice. Lauryn's response was an openness, willingness and deliberate honest consideration of the meaning and impact of an intimate relationship with Frankie. Neither treated the other with frivolity. Honesty, respect, passion, desire, forgiveness--impressed with the love and tenderness; sex within this context ...very sexy!

Trace_WatersTrace_Watersabout 7 years ago
P.S. Jealous

This story makes me jealous for a Fankie and Lauryn relationship!

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
Oh wow!

What a fantastic story! This one had me running the gamut of emotions... angry, happy, sad. It even made me cry. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loving Frankie

I love frankie... so complete and diverse.

Beautiful story.

luvinglesluvinglesabout 6 years ago

I'm So Gay, TOO! Love this story. Would love to have my own Frankie or Lauryn. Amazing writing. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Not gay

This is a beautiful love story. I'm not gay but it was a turn on for me as well as being a beautiful love story. I wonder if I am missing something in life. :-)

gpond49gpond49about 6 years ago
Beautiful!

This is the second time I have read this story and I got more wrapped up in it the second time. The characters are so well developed they seem alive and it seems like I know them and can identify with them--I share their joy and their sorrow, their laughter and their tears. The love is palpable. This does what good writing should do--grab you by the neck and pull you in. Congratulations. Don't ever stop.

BigGun44BigGun44about 6 years ago
Amazing

Great story, a lot of drama and happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Lovely

That was an absolutely intoxicating and lovely story.

foxyfowlerfoxyfowleralmost 4 years ago
Awesome

This story was very real life and two people who loved each other deeply and true and hope you will write and let us all know about the marriage and whether they have children and what becomes of the children as they grow up, fantastic storyline thank you ImSoGay. xx

Only_connectOnly_connectover 3 years ago

Nice story, taking the time to describe the characters and their relationship. But story a bit crude (pretty basic and clunky). But what great sex scenes! Those are really something!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I love the story it was beautiful

Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

Sorry you haven't written any more than the 2 stories listed here. This was a well written one with 2 fleshed out characters and a creditable storyline. The ending was good but a little abrupt although was expecting it to involve her mother more. Perfect reason for another chapter. 5 from me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Frankie was very controlling, even in very small ways (like being pissed that lauryn wasn’t in the bed the next morning - like chill). But their first time together was well written. Just wish I could like Frankie more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Its good to read a story with realistic characters with their hurts, weaknesses and faults all on display. I like the way they face life's hurdles and overcome them rather than just being two 2 dimensional cardboard cut outs of some flawless super hero, as is too common in many stories on this site.

It is a loss to this site and its readers that you only wrote 2 excellent stories before stopping.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very well orchestrated storey but the over arrogance of the principal character overshadowed the feel of the plot. Still interesting though

UncertainTUncertainTabout 1 year ago

I loved reading this again. Have you just reposted this as I am sure that I voted 5* last time and there must have been earlier comments?

AlyssaTennyaAlyssaTennya10 months ago

Did not care for main character, too selfish. Too rich. Am a fan of rich vs poor relationship dynamics or rich vs middle class but rich vs ungodly rich just leaves me pissed off at the more obnoxious one.

UncertainTUncertainT9 months ago

Loved reading again.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Frankie is a unique character: an author fantasy Mary Sue who is nevertheless entirely unpleasant, without redeeming qualities. Shallow, jumps to conclusions CONSTANTLY--her only personality traits are being rich, not listening to people she claims to care about, and liking it when bimbo with even less personality fawns all over her. Selfish and controlling.

At least Lauren is rich, too, or the power dynamics would be even more abusive.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

After finishing up the tragic and heartbreaking story 'Valerie' in my back catalog this one was a fantastic respite. Thank you for that.

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