by Remec
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Police have uncovered yet another body connected to the so called 'Raincoat Killer'. A spokesman for the Mayors office said ...
for me is the clarity. Three stanzas and you have packed in childhood, dating woes, a discussion with a store clerk, the image of the guy lounging around in the coat - and possibly something weird about his fingers. I love that last line.