All Comments on 'Natty Silver'

by EverNoir

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sadisticmpsadisticmpover 11 years ago
more please

continue the story please....

MimiRoseMimiRoseover 11 years ago
Please...

Don't make me hunt you down and force you to write another chapter for this story. Thank you. :)

trubblemakurtrubblemakurover 11 years ago
2 things

This is a good start to the story but it was too short. Looking forward to more of your story.

flgurleygrlflgurleygrlover 11 years ago
Liking this!

I stumbled across your story and am very excited about reading more. Very enjoyable read. Please update soon.

angelx602angelx602over 11 years ago

I found it quite erotic the way he took her blood and talked to her afterwards. You could just see the smirk on his face as he was asking if she was afraid now. I loved it, can't wait for another chapter.

dliterdliterover 11 years ago

Now what, who strung him up, is he going to convert her?

EverNoirEverNoirover 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments, guys!

I appreciate all of the comments! And, not to worry, this is just the first chapter of several to come. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ummmmmmm pleasseee write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I love it . . .

I can not wait for the next chapter. Hopefully I do not have to wait too long . . .

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