Didn't think you could, but this is even better than the first story. Very sexy, can't wait to see if you can top this. Keep them coming.
very hot and veeerry sexy! you have a terrific voice for this medium! well done and please keep submitting!! 5 Stars!!
Thanks so much guys for the lovely feedback. Score wise I don't think it's doing that great but I really appreciate the comments here and privately as well as the votes good and bad!
Beautiful -- love your submissive, dirty little mind.
What a hot story! Loved the long leisurely build-up and your climax sounded completely real. Can't wait to hear more!
I am so hard right now. If he doesn't come back later to get you off - I will!
Superb, with some really imaginative passages - and what a voice!
Putting my headphones on to listen (and cum) with co-workers around...mmm, this is such a great story.
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