by Fluffy07
in the real world this would be stalking and assault. i dont see this turning to love unless she is a woman that likes to be abused
Great story. Please keep updating!!! Alexander is definitely complex and obsessed as he put it. Miranda is young and impressionable and does not know what she is really getting herself into; Alexander is a man with a plan and Miranda is that plan. She likes him, so that is a start. But will it be enough? We will see.
I love a dominant man but he sounds like the type that ends up on 20/20 wearing an orange jumpsuit saying he didn't do it. Not feeling him yet. Hope she stands up to him for real.
Is Alexander a vampire or something?? Aside from being crazy and controlling???
Lol at the comment that said Alexander is the type who ends up on 20/20 because I was thinking the exact same thing. Homeboy is more than obsessed but controlling and manipulative. Personally I would like to see a bit more emotion and personality from him because he is coming off as one dimensional. Plus it would be nice to know WHY he is obsessed. What triggered it? What's his backstory? I think you may want to clear up why he is he infatuated with her because all we read from him is MINE MINE MINE YOU BELONG TO ME! And while that can come off as a good trait for an alpha male it comes across as asshole-ish and aggorant on Alexander because he as a character is still a mystery. It is a good story but as mention just has a bit of loose ends/holes that needs to bridge the gap in the storyline.
leave us here hanging!? ma'am please continue T_T im eager to know what hapends!
this is a great story, can't wait for the next one. By the way people should not continue reading stories they don't like just to end up bad mouthing the writer. That is why there are tags, u can't expect every story to go ur way. If u see a tag and u don't think u would like the stories under it, ignore it.
Someone speculated that alex may be a vampire or something I can't say the idea didn't toss through my head also. Possessive men exist in real life but I can't imagine any woman making it this far in life without noticing that this guy pings ever "run while you still can" red flag in the book. Yet she trust him? Why? He has given her no reason to do to.
Anywho I'm all for her dumping the jackass and running off with Jo...I have a thing for the strong silent type. :)
great story... of course. love the dominant type. I am a passive/aggressive black woman myself and appreciate a dominant/alpha male personality. it's a challenge for both... and your writing style tells me you know that as well. Fluffy07, stick to your story. love it and will be looking for more of your work.
I really hope you continue this soon please. Amzingly writen wonderful story flow and I'm a sucker for possesiveness so this story is perfect !
THANKS!
I need this story finished it's like a drug that u can't keep away from.
This is tooooo hottt. Please finish!
I agree with the comments below me...I wanna see the fireworks and I hope she's got some backbone on her to deal with him...looking forward to the next instalment :)
Ok, again where is the rest of the story? I know you are not going to let one comment stop you from finishing this story? Please give me more! I think this story is going to be HOTTT! If someone has a problem with direction the story is going, they can just stop reading it. That is why they have a freedom of choice, but they don't have the right to make you feel bad about what you wrote!
I really like this story. The main characters have mind blown chemistry and they seem like interesting characters on their own. Plus I enjoy the dominant/submissive elements in this story. This is probably the first interracial story I have seen on Literotica with dom/sub elements. Though I have a slight problem with how short it is. You should expand it more. Keep it up and please post the next chapter soon.
I crave more, I love the characters so please bring more chapters!!!!!!!
Hopefully someone did kick him in the nuts and he was unable to finish being part of the story
I need more of this story cause I come on this site to make sure you have finished the story like everyday. Please put me out of my misery
I know life happens but we are in desperate need of another LONGER chapter... There is definitely more to tell so hurry up and put us out of our misery. I need a chapter 4.
Chapters 1-5 but will settle 4. I'm enjoying the story so far. Miranda may be young but she is smart who can handle arrogant Alexander. Good chemistry...
This story deserves to be completed. I can't wait for the domineering asshole to get his comeuppance :).
The author will never finish ths story but they're ain't no way Randy ends up with alex and they're happy he is way too controlling if the story was continued she would end up with Jo after he probably saved her from and abusive Alex who will end up either dead or in jail
Has potential. Rewrite so that it is cohesive enough that it reads smoothly. Right now it’s chopped