All Comments on 'A Birthday to Remember Ch. 04'

Now that's a twist. But honestly, don't let us hang there. Let's hear the aftermath.

Loved

When is the next chapter? Or is this carried on in another story?

It went on forever and where did it go?

And MountainBoy is right - please add the last installment

I got so emotionally involved in this story you can’t end it like that! What happened next?! What did David text say?! What?!?!?!?!?!!!!!

Can't leave people hanging. What's the rest of the story. Does Jen and Helen get together or what

Please finish the story