All Comments on 'Becoming a Pet'

I hope to read more!

this is great, keep at it

I enjoy the idea of being slave to and falling in love with a sultry sucubus

Add more plz!

Balchsack, you have at great story. I hope that you continue it. It would be great if you turned this into a series. You have laid the ground work for an excellent series. You could have the grand succubus, whoever she is, have adventures with her "Pet" in the underworld. Also you could have her be a recent "grand high succubus with very little experience to her position. You also could have her and her pet explore succubus society as a race and as a whole. You could have her deal with a vicious rival who wants to steal her pet from her. She could be the one succubus who is kind to her pets and doesn't kill them after sex like the others, for example, or she doesn't like to share her men with others. You could have the succubi race on the brink of dying out and thus the need for stealing humans as "pets" or for reproduction."

You could make her the illegitimate child of the queen of all succubi and an angel or what have you. She could be an outcast who clawed her way up the ladder of succubi society just to get a pet so she wouldn't be lonely. Like I said you have the beginnings of a great story series here.

I hope that you continue it.

Cheers Dogsears

Interesting. Did not know that Succubi had a ranking system at all. Given the story here, sounds like the guy may be in a dimension that some may call Hell. This particular Succubus may have a major rank, but that means that there may be ones that have even higher ranks. Supposing that your Succubus got a really HIGH rank, would that mean that she may have a real buttload of men in some kind of "stable" that she can play with at any time? Nice work here on this one. 🍟🍗🍕🌮🥪🍔🌭🍪🍩🍦🍺