by Kellymay2
I LIKE DAD DAUGHTER SEX
I HAVE GIVEN ENJOYMENT TO MANY SWEET SOFT SMART CUTE LITTLE TIGHT TINY YOUNG FRESH VIRGIN PUSSIES
WITH ED HEAD LIPS
GOLDEN PINK CLITORIES
HONEY FILLED PUSSY HOLES
PUSSIES MAIL angeluwish@gmail.com
should of made it to where it said more detail as to what he did to his daughter and if they kept going..you left out a lot at the end. BOOOO!!!
You have written a fine 5 star first chapter to what promises to be a very interesting series.
Now please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
slightly odd as is it under incest- guessing that she imagines it all or something like that???
As with many stories on this site, the author used native British vocabulary and British expressions. For those of us who don't live in England, it can be confusing to read about 'sixth-form', 'posh' & 'mates' unless we're familiar with these terms.
It would be a good idea to write in more general international English where possible. For example, 'friends' instead of 'mates'. It simply makes it a little more relevant to a wider audience. Just saying.