All Comments on 'Daddy and Daughter's Perspectives Ch. 01'

by Kellymay2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
i like dAD DAUGHTER SEX

I LIKE DAD DAUGHTER SEX

I HAVE GIVEN ENJOYMENT TO MANY SWEET SOFT SMART CUTE LITTLE TIGHT TINY YOUNG FRESH VIRGIN PUSSIES

WITH ED HEAD LIPS

GOLDEN PINK CLITORIES

HONEY FILLED PUSSY HOLES

PUSSIES MAIL angeluwish@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WTF

should of made it to where it said more detail as to what he did to his daughter and if they kept going..you left out a lot at the end. BOOOO!!!

William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
Well Done!

You have written a fine 5 star first chapter to what promises to be a very interesting series.

Now please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
odd

slightly odd as is it under incest- guessing that she imagines it all or something like that???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Widen your audience

As with many stories on this site, the author used native British vocabulary and British expressions. For those of us who don't live in England, it can be confusing to read about 'sixth-form', 'posh' & 'mates' unless we're familiar with these terms.

It would be a good idea to write in more general international English where possible. For example, 'friends' instead of 'mates'. It simply makes it a little more relevant to a wider audience. Just saying.

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

^ fuck off yank. They can write how they want.

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