All Comments on 'one morning, between spaces of time'

by Scheherazade73

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demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Thank you -

Something to reread.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
5ed

out of curiosity can you justify the word "precise" as in "precise moment," rhetorical question. just wondering.

Scheherazade73Scheherazade73over 11 years agoAuthor
precise

@twelveoone: I uses "precise" as a juxtaposition between the impossibility of assigning it any time value...it is, after all, nonexistent...and the reality of feeling it and experiencing it as if it's happening in real time. If that makes sense. I probably do it a disservice trying to explain it.

Scheherazade73Scheherazade73over 11 years agoAuthor
use, not uses...

heavens.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
just a pattern

a sonic pattern

pretend I don't notice.

I miss that precise moment,

that phantom pain.

i was just wondering how conscious it was

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
This is so good it hurts

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
*****

Five.

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