All Comments on 'My Dark Angel Ch. 03'

You've got a great story here. I'm excited to find out how the story progresses :)

The story does need a bit of editing though. There are some grammatical, word usage errors.

Happy Writing!

I finished all three in under three minutes, i was so captivated, i forgot about my delicious popcorn-i have it now- and it was totally worth it!! I can't wait to get to the next pages!!!

aww you need longer chapters it's a very good story

i read you story .i like them but you take too long to write the next ch.

These chapters are too darn short. Write longer chapters, please?!

longer chapters indeed when a story is as good as this one we the ppl need longgg juicy pages to stick or noses into and not surface till its all done lol love it so far.love nix

This is such an uncommon story, I can't wait to read what else is going to happen.

BTW, please don't take offense - you're a good writer, but your grammar is very bad !