by seat542
Love the character development and the scenes you described. Wonderful beggining to a series, I hope!
Well written and very detailed to the point one would think it all firsthand fact. Surely kept my eyes glued. Great descriptions of the girly things. 5 stars well earned.
great story,made me want to suck my brothers cock,instead I had to unload in my hand and eat the prize myself. Thanks for a great jerk!
One of the most touching and erotic transexual stories I have ever read, I only hope ( make that desire) that the next chapters to be as good.
good job on the writing...i loved it....cant wait to read the rest and the develiopment of Laurens character.....
oh my that was one hot story and very well wrote and i will be waiting for more.had me hard in my panties.
the second part will be released later this week....hope you enjoy it as much
This is probably one of my favorite stories I've ever read. Never have I wanted to be a character in a story as I was with this. Thank you and can't wait for more.
I loved this! Can't wait for more... I guess that I have to start writing my next story! Inspiration! Yummy!
Can't wait for the next installment. I'm eagerly anticipating the anal action between loving people. I particularly liked the comparison between 'just sex' and sex with emotional involvement.
I keep reading this one, it's so good. It's kinda like my dream life scenario! :-)
love reading the story and kept me reading more. can't wait til the 2nd chapter. loved the way the three of them make love. so nice. would love to do that so much.
Truly loved this story, hot , erotic , sensitive and loving ! My favourite story. Really well written . Oh to be with Jamie and Lauren!
Were do I sigh up to met you and your brother. I had a hard on while reading this and wishing I to could be in panties with you all...
What a well written story. So hot, but so loving. Have often wondered if I met someone like those girls. I don't think my spouse would approve, so I will have to keep it in my book of fantasies. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
passion, lust, and love. This was incredibly well done. Excellent story-telling.
Mmmm, this was delicious, hot, and oh-so-worth another chapter.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please continue writing.
I've only read one story better and thats Chapter 2. Please write Chapter 3