All Comments on 'One Spring Day Ch. 03'

finally got around to reading this. very intriguing to bring the sister in to create jealousy.

This story is really hot and I'm really looking forward to the next part! I really like your work and I don't think this story should end so abruptly.

One of the best, absolutely brilliant. I loved it ... but then they ruined it with incest.

I am enjoying this story, altho I still cannot find where it is going, that makes it one story I may not look forwad to search out and follow.

I wish daughterof1917 would write another chapter to this story. What happens to the sisters? Are the tables turned on the mistress? With their minds controlled do they get into even deeper trouble? Do they escape? Does their mistress humiliate them further? Are their friends and parents 'made' to accept their new personalities? Do they become a regular fixture at the cafe? So many ways this story could develop

I can see where you were going to take this...please do!!