by jmanteau
oh I just loved this, it is so original.
Your imagery is fantastic, I want to see more, but perhaps it is better to end it, I am conflicted.
I hope you write more stories~~
I think if I'd been the barn owner, I'd have kept you around for awhile--you seemed to have enjoyed it, and so did he. Why let another opportunity for sex pass? Good story.
An experience that's wonderful and terrifying all at the same time. Outstanding. Thank you for writing it. I really enjoyed reading it.
Thank you, this is just what I needed to read this evening. Very nice!
This was a great story! I loved the descriptions and the way you made it feel almost like I was there... Very erotic and romantic and scary all at the same time. Maybe there will be a chapter 2? ;)
Yes, a sequel would be nice! Lovely story! Very erotic and arousing. Liked it. Thank you.
I liked the story but very fifty shades of gray??!
Well written though
@Anonymous Does everything with slight BDSM tendencies have to be classified as 50 Shades of Grey? This piece is clever and well written, likening it to a poorly written Twilight fanfic is unreasonable.
Author, loved this! Sad that she had to leave! If you write a sequel, maybe she can just hang around.. Test him.