All Comments on 'The Urge'

You can't even write a story

Thanks for sharing looking forward to your next submission.

True medieval didn't have vacuum cleaners...she could have used it to get sucked off faster than FFing herself! Poor kids have to stay a little longer! Bad, Bad Urges!

Thanks for the feedback! This is my first ever submission and I have a few more in the works. I will take more time with the next ones, so hopefully they will be a little better to read. I hope you'll read more of my stories in the future.

You lost no time in that story! A promising start. Interesting style having lust in the third person. Thanks for writing. Will we be seeing more?

Did Tarzan write this? Woman clean. Woman horny. Man home. See Woman horny. Man fuck Woman. Woman cum. Man blow load in Woman. End.

Could have been a little more in depth. It's short, even for a Flash. But still... nice.

4-stars

Different style. I enjoyed it. Good story about the biological desire for sexual satisfaction.