All Comments on 'Holy Halloween Batman 2012 Ch. 02'

Very Hot.......hope to hear more of this soon

Both stories while descriptive of the acts, and all, they were pretty rushed it would seem. There was no build up ... no tease ... for the characters. It was just "Let's jump in the sack and rutt." There was a bit more tease in the form of Aunt when the sister-in-law showed up. Needs in my opinion an extra page of character development and teasing. Still well written, 3 stars.

Since mother did it with her son, might as well include her brother.

(3/20/2023) Ten years! I'm sure you had a chapter three in mind. Why'd you stop writing?