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tazz317over 11 years agoA PUMPKIN AND A BEER JOKE
stranger couples have intertwined before, TK U MLJ LV NV
Desejoover 11 years agoI don't know what Tazz means about Beer
Did I miss something?! I think this is very, very clever and belongs in the back of a cinderella book specifically for halloween. Great imagination!
Mo_B_Dickover 11 years agoWonderful.
Inspirational! Learning to write poetry for a Mable of my own. Thank You.
twelveooneover 11 years agoi 5ed
don't take the 5 too serious, do take this advise
cut,cut,cut
avoid rhyming couplets, that said,
When Jack arrived in early fall
He had no eyes; saw light in all.
It was late October when the cutters arrived;
Vines were severed; their connection survived.
these are very good
try leaving comments also
MisterSadeover 11 years agoCaptain Kirk
Captain Kirk, can you save me?
Captain Kirk, I want to have your baby.
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I believe in Kindness, God , Joy , The Holy Spirit: all of which guide me !! When I meet someone I see the similarities and common bond of being born into the human race as equals. No one is any less or more important than me. As it should be.
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