All Comments on 'My Little Sister Ch. 02'

by Rexie2006

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 11 years ago
I appreciate the stilted formality of AngloSaxon colloquialisms used to describe the sibling depravity !

This has quite put me in the mood for a wee bit of tea & a few bites of a tasty strumpet. Seriously though, there's a weird innocence innate in both the characters that's incongruous with their actions . This is too short but what's here is well done & loads different from the usual tripe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Proof Read!!!

"My dressing gown opened below it's tie displaying my erect cock ..." - when you have an 'inverted comma' it is indicating a missing letter. Thus, 'it's' is showing a letter missing between the 't' and the 's', as in 'it is'. OK, now put that in place where you put 'it's'! Does it make sense? - "My dressing gown opened below it is tie displaying my erect cock ..."?

It doesn't, does it? On the other hand, 'its' is showing possesive - as in 'the tie belonging to my dressing gown'. "My dressing gown opened below its tie displaying my erect cock ..." .

Ever read a "Mills and Boon"? There is no 'e' on the end of 'Boon'!

And so on ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well, that was disappointing...

really didn't want the parents getting involved, at least not for some time... <sigh>

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
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Another LAZY author who uses apostrophe's instead of quotation marks for dialog. Pure laziness. Don't give the bullshit of that's the way we do it in the UK. It's laziness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I do hope you will continue and ignore the hecklers

Great story, more please

RoukleyRoukleyover 11 years ago
SERIOUSLY???

You jackoff's! This is an amature story site,

you're real beef is actually the grammer? You

sorry sacks of a-hole shit! ROTFLMFAO! Seriously?

Seriously? I thought I had so little a life that

I myself tend to frequent this site quite a bit more

than any normal guy should, but you two just

take the taco! OH-HOHOHOHAHAHA SHIT! You guys suck...

oh my side, that's great lol... oh and to the author, good

job yo, nice...it was nice...

hardheadd1hardheadd1over 11 years ago

Yea I take comments seriously from Anonymous posters. Yea right!!!! I think the stories are pretty good considering it is from a first timer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more please

Great story, I can hardly wait for more of it, please post more soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Story

I can't believe how anal some of these people are about grammar mistakes. This is a sex site not an English study class. Get a life. A great story, please continue.

purplelilypurplelilyover 11 years ago
members comments

Please listen to people that comment and ARE members from this site.

There are too many people that will not leave a name but are quick to

comment. You are doing a good job with the story and build up was good.

After reading part 1-you needed some background on why the father reacted

the way he did and mother was clueless due to deafness. Sometimes when

comments are made, the confidence of writing can be affected. Listen to what

the members say and not ones who aren't. Really like your series-keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Please post more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Please continue this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Oh god what's going to happen now moreeeeeeee

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great story

H O T, need to know the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Next?

Please, when might we expect the remaining chapters of this story? I will forgive the grammatical errors for the rest.

Love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Pleeease continue writing! Looking forward to your next awesome chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
IF YOU ARE SMART

you will ignore all the fake rave reviews and listen only to the complaints, that is the only way you will ever improve. all those kiss ass members do writers no favors by giving rave reviews on subpar stories if they gave HONEST reviews writers would either improve or go away making the site a lot better than it is now.

ChasBChasBover 10 years ago
Continue, Please

So, is Rexie going to leave this hanging? Regardless of the small errors, this is a good story, and deserves to be told in its entirety. I hope we will still learn what dad did, and whether Tim and Stacy were able to finally, fully realize their love. Let's have more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Continue the story

Feed Us More ! Feed Us More ! Feed Us More !

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

What??? Where's part 3??? You can't leave us hanging like that

JhMcKnJhMcKnover 5 years ago
My Little Sister Chapter 2

Oh my. They continue to play with each other. He induces her to piss in his mouth in the tub and when they get to the bedroom, they are eating each other. Then fucking each other and get caught by daddy.

What's going to happen in Chapter 3?

I hope to find out shortly.

Keep up the great story telling. Don't pay much attention to the grammatical heroes. Who cares if is it's or, in this case as it should be, its????

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