All Comments on 'A Mere Figment'

You're gonna be a hit on Lit. Keep writing. There's some roughness in the transitions, and there was no need to introduce the just-home-from-college bit so early, but the way you carried the story is very good. Like I said, keep writing.

I loved it, I do hope you continue with this story. I'll be checking back to see if you do. Best of luck to you, you're starting off well. ;)