All Comments on 'Calliope's Daddy'

i think it`s in the right category....would love to read more of you

I absolute adore DaddyDom dynamics and you did an excellent job at this story!

I GREATLY enjoyed reading your story and how you mixed in the Bdsm into keep up th good work and look forward to reading more

it is good but still need alittle caring in time like in time he didnt think he care about her so much or she gets pregnant would be good

Another chapter to this story would be great! Please do it! Loved it. Thank you

Loved this part, on to the next? will be watching.

Very exciting. Can't wait to see where this one goes.

Another would be welcome

Like most writers here your comments mean the world to me, I have been working on a second part and should have it up shortly. Thank you all again for the support :)

Not exactly my usual reading but I was captivated. Nicely written Ellie. Thanks ;)

your most welcome Byron, Thank you for reading it :)

A very good read and great story. Thank you dor sharing it.

excellent story

Its so nice to still receive such nice comments after the story has been up for a while. thank you so much ^_^

Can't wait to read the rest!

This is an excellent piece of work. I loved it.

Thanks everyone for your continued support and such nice comments they mean the world to me.

Way to tame a foul-mouth little whore! Wonderful story!

Never seemed so enjoyable. Great story line and very well put together.

Moving on to the next....

Lee

thx for the great story

Very good story. I would like to read more.

OK You have me hooked!!! Will prolley read all Callies story tonite!!

You are a Very Good storyteller.

GREAT STORY! Wish to see more from you.

I really enjoyed this well-written daddydom story!

enjoyed reading how they met...it peaked my curiosity to read more.

Not exactly incest. Your disclaimer before the story inticed me to read it. I really don't like actual incest, But Paddy isn't really related. She is of age so it's not child molesting. DADDYDOM/little girl stories have their place. A good beginning.

Where do you come up with some of these names? I've heard of Calliope before, but not Padraic. One of the reasons I like to read your stories is to see what names you've come up with for your characters.

I loved it. I will be reading the other chapters. Great work of the mix. Who doesn't love a daddy dom? I am still waiting for my daddy.

What a well written and exciting story. I have just discovered you and will surely be reading the rest. Daddy dom is not my usual story to read, you, however, have such a wonderful way of writing, I believe I may have now been converted.

Thanks so much

You are a good writer, young lady. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Goodbye xelliebabex

What is the fascination with abusive doms? First you have Mel who was a family friend and gave Bella a job. Bella’s choice was to accept being Mel’s slave or she would have to leave her job and her new life. And now you have Padric who was entrusted by Calliope’s mother to take care of Calliope but then abused that trust as Calliope’s alternatives were either the street or hire her own lawyer who might get her a lighter sentence or sign a year long contract with Patric as his sub and Padric would try his utmost to settle Calliope’s case with probation. Considering what the author wrote in “The Nature of Consent”, how can either case be informed consent when both Bella and Calliope were not given real choices and in the second case inadequate/misleading information (Calliope is 19 and with no money will likely get legal aid and there are alternatives to jail at that age. Padric represented Calliope in court and as her lawyer it is unethical for him to engage in a sexual relationship with his client and could lead to him losing his license to practice if a complaint is made). Is this a case of I believe in the importance of consent but my fetish is non-consent for the author?

For the comment before about abusive Doms, this is the non-con section so stories will be darker.

Being threatened with going to gaol or being beaten and fucked is rape.

I stopped reading there. Rape in fiction sickens me nearly as much as the real thing.

It is even worse when the child is being abused and raped by someone in authority who should be being a protector.

You are a good author, and generally your stories are well worth reading. Not this one though.

Please use the non consent tag when a story involves anyone being raped.

It's in the wrong category. It's not incest, it's non-consent. But of a disappointment if you're looking for an incest story and you get a rape/ slave story