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The Leading Swim

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/12/12

Tension

A very nice story. I think it got at the kind of tension that can naturally build up in some relationships. Interesting the daughter wanted intercourse, rather than giving oral, but I think its b/c her desire had been delayed so long

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by Padishah196211/12/12

Response

Thought the last comment was interesting. Does anyone think a girl would want to do oral first or only for their dad?

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by imharmless6911/15/12

Wow

Truly one if the best stories I've seen here in quite. The tension, the desire, the need are palpable throughout. I can't wait to read more if your work.

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by avidreader944511/16/12

Great blend

Of heat and affection. Well written and paced with plenty of action. Please keep sharing your talent with us.

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by Luving262911/28/12

Too short

My ONLY complaint!

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