All Comments on 'Stuart's Wake Up Call'

by sexy_mama_09

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peebudypeebudyover 11 years ago
good

i usually like it when there is more cat-and-mouse tension and build up before they act on their incestuous passion, but this was a good story nonetheless!

QuadeQuadeover 11 years ago
Suggest

that you write a pre-quel. The first time she noticed him, the first flash, etc. This might have been a fair-to-good part 2, but not enough build up.

josephstevensjosephstevensover 11 years ago
Very Good!

Another great story...keep 'em coming...love it.

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