All Comments on 'King to Slave'

I finally read your bio. I get why you write these boring, repetitive stories. Your "EX" wife trained you? What? Are you a dog? You sure seem to be suffering a hang over from your divorce. Get some help.

As a slave boy he needs to learn to suck cock and suck and swallow real man cum. And for the bi studs who fuck the queen, the slaves pussy should also be available to be bred.

You are a clown

It's an amazing read and one that I keep coming back to. Please do a sequel.

I don't know why but I have always thought about licking pussy, even before I knew where babies came from(or that it was pleasurable for her). Now that I'm in my early 20s, though, I always lusted for a mature athletic queen's caramel of mocha womanhood to savor....mmmm

What a lovely story -so delectable!

Lovely.

Please continue!

Are you seriously saying that in medieval times there was actually a king who was a slave and everybody knew it?I thought it would just stay private cause no subjects would follow a slave or let him or his wife sit on the throne. Have you everrrr watched game of thrones. But yeah it was an arousing story. Thanx

This story is AMAZZZZING..please try to make a sequel

This is the best story I've ever read, everything was literally perfect

You didn't need to smear the story with her sitting on the throne and the cuckolding thing, you write only that kind of stuff??? Even if he was the worst beta, a king wouldn't let it go so far. The story should end at his third attempt to act kingly, or as femdom story, if you wanted to spice it up, you could end it with the queen riding him like a pony inside the room, while he telling all the sweet things to his queen and her patting his head:"Aww, good slave" (end), (credible, cause, apparently, he is unable to stay on his feet near her), or the queen letting him spurt will humping between her legs after he succomb for the second time with his head between her ass, (because I saw what you mean at the part where the queen welcome him affectionately, (apparently she knew he will try to regain some control, after debasing himself last night, then she lure him gradually to the same "predicament"), the king, recalled that he should regain control tried withdraw his head off her ass to make his way up, and at this moment she take his cock between her legs and massage, causing the king to lost controll and go back tongue deeper than before up her rosebud. "Now you know your place" she said, laughing, while he thrust between her legs then to bring himself the to conclusion of his knew role (end). Even if it's a fiction and I'm not even writter, but I see so many ways to end the story a way less.......fictious