All Comments on 'Crystal Gets a Makeover'

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zena99zena99over 11 years ago
Very entertaining

A continuation would be nice,

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
A nice adult fairytale

What would be better is to be the man in her life, the man she loved and gave herself to.

Thanks for the unusual story.

Paladin11987Paladin11987almost 9 years ago
Is there more...?

Does the little man return? Will you develop the son's adventures? What role does Lupe' play? What about investing her money... as all porn stars will tell you, shelf life is short and life should be long and enjoyable.

SirCarlSirCarlover 8 years ago
Well done.

Keep it going.

warnoswarnosover 8 years ago
Well done

Nice chapter hope you keep up the good writing for the series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
how does turning crystal and bryan into skanks help?

3 fourths of the world will look down on them the rest won't care, but they have money so being the trash of the earth doesn't matter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
@anon "how... "

Since she's an adult film star, she doesn't care about those rest of the people. And she's got money. Everybody loves you when you got money. If you got money, you could be the lowest asshole, yet you could run for president.

Dont_miss_meDont_miss_meover 7 years ago
Another great "happy ever after" story...

I'd love to see more of them but understand if they're done.

@anon... dude, it's a freakin story. Stop trying to bring the real world into something supposed to entertain and make the mind relax. Sometimes I t's not always about realism.

blackknight314blackknight3149 months ago

Great job, thanks for sharing your work. ...and they all lived happily ever after!

sirbatshitcrazyESQsirbatshitcrazyESQ6 months ago

this was kind of an ok story but it was missing the mind control... there was just so much missing from out of this story to make it about mind control.. this almost felt like it was about Fantasy then anything eles

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

A strange but interesting tale. But please get your stories edited. Too many grammatical errors.

rbloch66rbloch663 months ago

That was extremely trashy and shallow…. Not worth the read.

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