Having to write in in a set number of words has done wonders for it - some of the best stories I have ever read, of any kind, have had this kind of 'economy' as a major part of their appeal. I know it can't have been easy - but you made it look as if it were!
A really top-class story - thank you for sharing it with us and I hope it satisfied the conditions of your task; it would be a hard task-master who frowned on this excellent piece of work!
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Brings back memories of my own (most pleasant) experience. Really well done. Thank you!
That was a fine story!
Having to write in in a set number of words has done wonders for it - some of the best stories I have ever read, of any kind, have had this kind of 'economy' as a major part of their appeal. I know it can't have been easy - but you made it look as if it were!
A really top-class story - thank you for sharing it with us and I hope it satisfied the conditions of your task; it would be a hard task-master who frowned on this excellent piece of work!
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