All Comments on 'Camping Ch. 01'

VERY EROTIC

umm were did the rest of the stiry go? thats the only reason it wasnt 100 i loved it JettaKid06@hotmail.com

Wanted to give you a five because I liked the premise, could only give you a four.There is no way she would be six feet tall and have big breast's. At one hundred and ten pounds,NO WAY she'd be a skeleton at one ten.You should just have said she was tall with large breast's.Though I personally find D cup or more a turn off sometimes less info is better.

great beginning. would like to know a little more about the siblings

"...semi-wild wilderness"?

And that's where you lost me.