All Comments on 'Two Become One'

Very sweet. Please write more.

sick sick sick

A big thank you to those who liked it! For those that did not, I'm sorry you didn't. Please let me know what would make it better.

I have been bisexual all my life. I have been married three times and divorced three times. I now live with a young woman in her 30's but lately I have been dreaming about fulfilling the other half of my sexual needs by finding a great guy, falling in love with him, and spending the rest of my life as a happy gay man. I recently met a young man of 26 and he wants me as his Daddy. I think I may just decide to move to a state where gays are welcome, can marry if they want and see if I can find a man to love. This story really makes me think about this seriously.

Loved reading your story, it was beautifully written & very hot. I am a bisexual man & it got me very horny.

Hope you write some more soon.

Didn't like it that much but it was ok

What a hot, sexy, naughty, dirty story! I loved it and have to read it again and again. I love your mind, the last part about "let me do it for you" was genius! That's one of my biggest fantasies, both giving and receiving a big, hot load. Thank you for adding that, I can't wait to read more of your work.