Delighted to follow the story of Laine, and now looking forward to further excitement and sub/dom events with Cassie.
Please keep going. It is a wonderful story line and very well written.
A good story about an initiate. I love it when a person is introduced to this lifestyle with the kind of love and compassion shown by the Domme. Look forward to more of this story. Well done
TinyBeth you have real writing talent please continue Lainie's journey, I love it!
Im a new sub and this story makes me cry with the relief of understanding why I'm so addicted to my man. I have always felt embarrassed of being sexy and horny but I cannot suppress it. Your story has brought me much joy.
I found the explanation of the self discovery of BDSM sensitive, compelling, desirable and erotic. Opened my eyes & heart.
Thank you all for your kind comments. The newest story in the Xanna series is up!
And here is a link the the original story- Laine Goes to the Ball
Thank you again for your support!
People treat their animals better. What on earth would make you think that a person would want to be treated in this fashion?
I really enjoyed this. I never denied the idea of BDSM but I never really excepted the idea either.
I really enjoyed reading this through another's point of view.
If you treat someone the way they want to be treated.... is that not the kindest treatment of all?
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