All Comments on 'Sorority Submission'

Awesome story! I love it already!

As always great reading and exciting. Waiting for more.

Where was Phi Delta when I was a young fraternity brother??

the artwork is extremely well done, the story builds to heat and eases off beautifully, cannot wait for next chapter, (though author states it takes longer than a single story to write in bio) anticipation builds a hotter next date :)

Nylons and full womanly apparell has kept us togethter for over 40 years panythose are for work not PLAY

Fantasy or real the female always allows the male his moments of dreams in play

A home run of a story. The art work embellishment is superior. Way to go !!!!

Thanks Don

Albeit writer's theme is obvious from her outset, ably assisted by semi-professional illustrations, hetrosexual readers will remain curious about any further task [dares] demanded in due course.

Excellent story line . Looking forward to submission 2.

Love the Story and Anne is soooooooo sexy and sweet can't wait to read more

I can't wait for the rest of the story. I love it so far.

another great story, but are you going to finish the other stories you have started, because all of the ones you have writing are very good. So please finish the other ones soon.

I felt myself in Annie's shoes...it was well written and i can't wait for more...

...you've outdone yourself. Great start. Keep it coming.

Enjoyed the story hope you will continue with it to a climatic ending so many stories are never continued and they have such great potential I enjoy a good story and look forward to what you have for us in the next chapters keep up the great work

I really enjoyed this. I liked the extra harsh and clearly domineering tone of the sorority hazing troupe. The "sexy guy" interlude was very believable. The interruption made it fun too. In fact, I think that interruption and awkward moment was a great.

please finish this, it was great but left me on edge. It needs more

Very good, looking forward tobthe next day

When will you finish the story?

Please post the next one!! This was amazing!

You always seem to deliver a quality story and know how to immerse the reader into the characters.

I REALLY enjoyed the illustrations as well...nice add.

I also agree about the believable sexy guy introduced into the story.

Please write more on this naive young girl coming out of her innocent world and finding her true destiny in life.

if they were lucky, they only got kicked out of school. With a little luck, they should have done jail time. It's sexy now to treat people like that? Bah!

Dang that was hotttt. When are you going to update

Hi wowwwww you did it again!!!!!!!!!!!! Very hot. i love how the shy girl is not so shy. Can not wait for more. Thank you

Sorority girls, humiliation and sex... what more can you ask for in a story.

When will the next stories.come out?

I would love to see what happens next!

I love how Little Anne loses track of herself during the inspection. I love how you let us into your charcters' minds; feeling their urges, hearing their questions of themselves.

I'm off to read chapter 2. Your writing gets better and better.

Interesting story. Keeps reader's attention. Grammar mostly OK. I'd like to read more of it. But...surprised at references to "vagina" when no vagina was in sight (cunt, labia, pussy lips whatever, were). Really surprised at "shaved vagina"... vaginas, of course, have no hair to shave (unlike cunt, pussy, outer labia etc.) I can't believe that a woman could be that ignorant of female anatomy. I therefore conclude that the author is a guy, wishing to portray himself as female. Nothing wrong with that, but some basic anatomical knowledge is needed!

great story and I liked the illustrations.

Making you do what you really wanted to do ?!

Fun story for sure, but Ann character just seems too naive based on the conversations and what she sees. Hell, you don't survive high-school if you're a girl like her and you can't see when you are the goat being staked out for the kill.

So far, so good. I look forward to future installments! Thanks for your work.

I always enjoy reading your stories they usually keep me hard and i love it hope you write somemore thhanks.

Another great start to a great series!

Looked like Anne had a little muffin....

482. Looks like an interesting beginning to this series. I have no idea if girl’s groups like sororities do this stuff or not, but if they do, I never heard of it from any of the girls I dated. I just know I enjoy reading them.

Beautiful colorful illustrations. They give off a very positive vibe