All Comments on 'Alien v Predator: Insemination Ch. 04'

Woot for update! Quality over quantity.

amazing series. i love your imagination. look forward to more!

deffinatly want more of this.

Bring on chapter 5!

Absolutely fantastic story!!!

That was a very, very smouldering hot story! Maybe you know, but there are rumours that the creator of the Alien-mythology, came up with the idea after a, very disturbing erotic dream, Maybe not this kind of kink, but I don't care - because this is a sci-fi story that could, and should, continue in many, many more naughty adventures.

Please, even if it may take time, continue with at least a few more chapters.

Thanks a bunch // Anonymous fan.

loved it awaiting more.

good to see you back in the swing of things i must admit that 8 month hiatus had me questioning how often i should be hitting the refresh button.i like the story, and am looking forward to the queen making a appearance. keep on keepin on

That was the best group xeno sex scene I've ever read! And I've read about 15!!! Please continue this! Also if you would like to have more people read this, post it on fanfiction.net under the M-rated section of AVP.

You have to continue this!!!

I will now end this review with Semper Fidelis

(translated from Latin to English, Always Faithful)

Dovahzeymah.

(Ps I have a Xenomorph X Human story on fanfiction if you're interested ;D just search for the name I signed this review with)

Thanks very much for your kind words! I would certainly like to read your story, especially since it depicts xeno x human. :D

I had a fanfiction.net account where I would post these stories but I no longer have it. This story actually got banned by moderators for some reason. Aren't they doing away with erotic and adult-content stories? I suppose I could post this their again but I don't want it to get dropped. That's why I just decided to delete my account there.

THIS IS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WANT MOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!! WHEN IS CH. 5 COMMING?

I have read many different stories from different authors and out of all of them you are the best. I really love all of your stories, you certainly paint them with images and very easy to follow and your kind of stories are really VERY rare. So please keep writing stories.

next part please. i was really getting into the story....

Please tell us when ch. 05 is coming i need more now

Quote from Aliens:

Dietrich: Looks like some sort of secreted resin.

Hicks: Yeah, but secreted from *what*?

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I was thinking, as I've read your story, that the Xenos' secretions, as our human protagonists have experienced first hand, could be how they go about creating the hive structures. The Praetorians might be charged with collecting genetic material of the humans to adapt as potentially new building materials.

I've enjoyed the story so far and look forward to seeing how it ends. Maybe as pets for the Predator male and female?

Aw! I was so into the story, too! Two years since this came out... please return and add another chapter! Please! This is amazing, and I'd love very much to see how it ends!

Great story! I read on your other website that you shut down the story because people were making fun of it.They don't understand.It does sound a little wierd to hear what this story is about without reading it.But I loved it once I read it.Dont let people put you down because of that. If you ever read this,Please listen to me and the other people here that there are people who LOVE this story.I implore you to return to the writing world

Love this concept! ♡ youre a talented writer, keep it up!