All Comments on 'Marie: My Hot Pharmacist Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Promising start

This is a good start - very unlikely premise, but fleshed out and written well enough to bring out the erotic nature.

Look forward to part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hope her husband finds out

then divorces her she dont love him she just fucked him over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Really well written

There's some depth to the characters, which makes it much more erotic. Looking forward to more soon!

DmitryDmitryover 11 years ago
So

an intern is screwing a pharmacist at a local Walgreens. Too bad there is no IV room at your local Walgreens, Sorry, but the place that offers $4 prescriptions ...no, no, no I should stop. Great story, with a great potential.

chilleywilleychilleywilleyover 11 years ago
Good start.

Nitpicking on the real world. She should have discussed this with her husband as he'll be devastated if he learns later that the kids arn't his. I would have rejected her notion of getting it over with, that conception should be an act of joy. I would have made better reading too.

But as is it was quite good and I enjoyed it. Backstory was good too

Chilley

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story

Let's get to part 2.

ramonbrookramonbrookabout 11 years ago
dam Hot story .....

This story has a great start! I cannot wait for more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very well-written

I'm curious to see how this turns out. More, please? :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

Wow. That was hot AF. Wish it would’ve continued!

OOAAOOAAabout 1 year ago

Hot story!!! Please, go on soon ;)

RealisticsixRealisticsixabout 1 year ago

WOW, I can't wait to read the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

where is part 2?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Really hot story! Please continue part 2 soon!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Fab story. Well written. Hope there is a part 2

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