All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

Quit reading after the words "D-TITS" as every writer (just about) seems to think every female has a set of "D" or "DD" Tits while most are 34B or C or a 35B or C !!

I don't read stories with a 10" Cock or Tits bigger than a 36C ~~ miss a lot of good story plots but who cares when everybody looks like Dolly or John H. ~~ I noticed nobody else has left Feedback yet...hummmmm.!*

GET REAL.! Yes you got a "1" and well deserved.**

Pleasant. I would have filed it under the heading "Romance" as it wasn't too"erotic." Just the right length for a coffee break. You better talk to Mallorie and ak her to edit for you.

chapter 1 in a manual of coming back from a downer, TK U MLJ LV NV

the first three paragraphs seemed out of sequence.