All Comments on 'The Last Dragons'

by softbuzz

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I am strangely facinated :)

So what's gonna happen when the eggs are ready to hatch? Hmmmmm...., that should prove to be interesting. LOL Couldn't Mira jack her dragon off and then he'd just have to wreck Edvards rectum once or twice at most? Just asking. This story made me smile. You have an active imagination and I am intrigued. Hope there is more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

man this is a really stupid story

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyover 11 years ago

I enjoyed reading this story I hope you continue with it.

Dravin_BlackDravin_Blackover 11 years ago
well that was different interesting but different

interesting story, I'd kinda like to know more about the dragon birthing process and if he could even survive it (she never told him he was gong to). will they just slide out or just bust out Ala alien and I'm no doctor but I'm kinda Sher you are not supposed to go 28 days without a bowel movement. i have a aunt that had a problem with her bowels a few years ago and within 9 days the doctor thought she was developing sepsis it almost killed her but i'd like to see more of this & I'm sorry if it seams I'm rambling i just tend to when my curiosity is piqued

angelx602angelx602over 11 years ago

Interesting. I am interested to read how he is going to birth those dragon babies. I have a feeling he isn't going to survive this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ok then

That was one of the oddest things ive read here but still a decent story

softbuzzsoftbuzzover 11 years agoAuthor
thanks

To those who left constructive comments I give you my thanks.

This is the first story I've ever written for public viewing.

I'm thinking of a followup to answer your questions and at the same time delve back into the past a bit to make up a reasonable sized second half.

I never really thought of this as a long story of multiple chapters, but you have got me thinking

To the anonymous comment that this was a stupid story, Thank you. I will try to incorporate your very useful comments into a future story ;-)

RakaanRakaanover 11 years ago
Alright then.

That was an interesting story. Weird, but interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
interesting

I liked the story. I think the idea you have is a good one and has a bit of idea I have never really thought possible. The post about how would living 28 days without bowel movements the she dragon did say all he ate would be used to nurture the eggs so i am guessing the eggs obsorb anything he might have digested. Hope to see more from you in the future you are a good writer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Really good story!

Thanks for your very imaginative and interesting story and the time you took developing and writing it. I really hope you continue it. It would be very cool to hear about the progress and growth of the baby dragons within him, how Mira will "look after" him and make sure he wants for nothing, and then the births of the babies. Lots of good erotic possibilities there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Story

Really great story the plot itself was well done and I would be interested to read more and finally happy I'm not two years late on the viewings I couldn't find anything wrong or mispronounced so ill love to here a new chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Sympathy

I think that it's a great story, although it kinda makes you feel sorry for Edvard with the pain he must have felt when Dravos fertilized Mira's eggs.

ValerionValerionabout 10 years ago
lol...damn

When I started the story, I was certain that I was going to read about a guy deep-dicking some sexy dragon. What I did not expect was to read about some guy getting deep-dicked by the female dragon AND her big-cocked dragon mate. Not a very sexy read but it was certainly fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

hay, its no wonder there is only two left. as a species, they wouldn't have many volunteers. also all the baby dragons would be related so there would most likely be future issues there with the inbreeding ect.

AncientKarmaAncientKarmaabout 8 years ago
Lol

The end of this story is so messed up but it's still good lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So what next

Look it was great,alittle confusing,but great.also WHAT THE HELL HAPENS NEXT!!!!!!

taco1085taco1085almost 6 years ago
wow

I am not why you have not written more and expanded this story but this was an amazing story. love to read more and find out what happens. are the dragons born and eat him, does he live after the 28 days. so many questions left unanswered.

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