All Comments on 'Performing'

well written loved the anal and especially on the son, very enjoyable. could you introduce fisting and big toys in the next installment please?

This liberated writer obviously realised young men require earlier 'CFNM' training, to become fully experienced lovers, in later life. Feminist Domme's should follow up this [hopefully a series?] line of thought with erotic interest! IE: Within Barbara's 'CFNM' household, females are normally refered to as 'Mistress'es, controlling the ejaculatory capacity of fully shaven stark-naked male lovers, whilst providing their more regular masturbation exercises in semi-public places amongst mature ladies!

A little bit of everything, and such a festive setting! Loved it.

Somehow, I found your characters thin and shallow, and that made it hard to become engrossed in the scene you painted. It wasn't believable, just a bit too trite. Perhaps if the girl didn't have marriage in mind, or "married" him without consent, or if the older guests behaved a bit more naturally it would have worked for me.

At least it was a story. Hard to empathize with anything or anyone. Stupid kid. As a teenager of age time to stand up for yourself. You will have no life.

Docile? After all the effort to stimulate Monty (was that a play on the movie "The Full Monty?), it seems a little contra-productive to make them docile.

That sort of shifted the scene away from what was ostensibly the purpose of the exercise and made it seem tawdry to me. Sorry, but it clashed with my personal foibles and I had to down grade it to a 4.