by Ashson
You should write a 3rd chapter where the couples sleep nude and the house gets broken into by a gang of 6 or 8 guys who really help the guys "educate" the girls.
I know it's a fantasy story , but so many virgins and not a drop of virgin blood running down their inner thighs or at least some cum leaking from their pussys? I believe little, but essential, details like that can better a story, make it hotter, and should not be left out.
Very good, interested and believable, liked the games and looking forward to part 2
I missed out on this type of activity when I was young. Now I am old, but I can certainly enjoy a good lusty tale such as this. Well done!
I am looking forward to reading the sequel.
that a woman's hymen, if present, is NOT somewhere down the vaginal canal. it´s at the door of the vagina. if you break through a hymen, ONLY THEN can you start on the vagina. very surprising lack of knowledge of basic human anatomy.
Fun premise. Would have been more interesting if there had been lewd comments or thoughts from those not involved in the action.