All Comments on 'Game People Play'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Part 3

You should write a 3rd chapter where the couples sleep nude and the house gets broken into by a gang of 6 or 8 guys who really help the guys "educate" the girls.

RebellRebellalmost 11 years ago
Keep on writing, but...

I know it's a fantasy story , but so many virgins and not a drop of virgin blood running down their inner thighs or at least some cum leaking from their pussys? I believe little, but essential, details like that can better a story, make it hotter, and should not be left out.

kenf570kenf570almost 10 years ago
Great Games

Very good, interested and believable, liked the games and looking forward to part 2

jott50jott50about 9 years ago
lov it!!!

i love these games!!! definatly 5*!!!

ronexearonexeaalmost 4 years ago
Lucky people

I missed out on this type of activity when I was young. Now I am old, but I can certainly enjoy a good lusty tale such as this. Well done!

I am looking forward to reading the sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
how does this author not know...

that a woman's hymen, if present, is NOT somewhere down the vaginal canal. it´s at the door of the vagina. if you break through a hymen, ONLY THEN can you start on the vagina. very surprising lack of knowledge of basic human anatomy.

joshprimjoshprimover 3 years ago
Not as good as Beach Party

Fun premise. Would have been more interesting if there had been lewd comments or thoughts from those not involved in the action.

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