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by SweetOblivion11/13/12

Brilliant

Love the walloping wind - so appropriate for a site that includes rather more unsubtle D/s material - grins - sweet O.

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by tazz31711/13/12

AN ARTIST PAINTS WHAT HE OBSERVES

you do the same justice with words. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by DawnJ11/24/12

Flat land...flatlined

I don't know why I see death in these lines. Maybe it's because reading them makes me think of Hardy's Tess and Angel, or Eustacia and Clym, on the wild Wessex heath.

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