All Comments on 'Sun on your back'

by demure101

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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
Clever as ever

Good rhyming and timing too. Sweet O.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
HEY D.....THIS ONE IS GOOD SONG MATERIAL

listen to Neil Diamonds...Hot August Night.....this could be your break through to a musical career.....TK U MLJ LV NV

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
"Weeping..."

"...may endure for a night, but joy comes in the morning." Your poem somehow reminded me of this verse from the Bible. "Everything old is new again", and the seasons are renewed...therein lies hope! :)

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