Can't wait to read about Betty when she gets the old stud's monster. I know she'll absolutely love it!
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Anonymous11/17/12
She should leave and file a complaint with police
Have him removed. If she lets in now she deserves to be divorced and thrown away.
Once you allow a man to take advantage of you and do that you might as well divorce cause you have no respect for yourself so how can you respect your marriage.
Regardless of who the individual is.
If this man did that to me while my husband was away i would have shot him in the nuts.
Thanks for your shity comment again. You too managed quite well. Well keep barking like a dog i don't care about dogs
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Anonymous11/17/12
Whats with the dogs?
When they see dogshit like this thats how people react. How old are you 12? Not only is the storyline lousy it is written like a elementary schooler. Badger was right this is worse than the first one
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Anonymous11/17/12
Nonsesnse
on the name of feedback some readers are really behaving like a dogs. author is right to call such people dogs. they indeed are dogs for they don't know what constructive criticism means. only human can provide such criticism not dogs who can't understand human language can just bark. what a waste of time to talk about such people. i will request the author to ignore such animals and continue the story.
let the dog bark for it knew only that much
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Anonymous11/17/12
The comments
here arë amazingly infantile. It's inconceivable that people would want to read ch.2 if they hated ch.1. That's masochism.
The story is very hot. More please, and soon!
Not complement. " realized how much wet her panty had become." Sounds like english is your second language. Is it? That would be a good excuse.
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Anonymous11/20/12
thanks
Thanks
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Anonymous11/30/12
Awaiting continuation of the story
I like how this story is going. Awaiting the rest of the story
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Anonymous02/01/13
more, more
the start of the story is great, love the build-up. he comes on but just enough to get her wanting more. Ses reluctant but cant help being more and more curious....
English
So damn hot!
Can't wait to read about Betty when she gets the old stud's monster. I know she'll absolutely love it!
She should leave and file a complaint with police
Have him removed. If she lets in now she deserves to be divorced and thrown away.
Once you allow a man to take advantage of you and do that you might as well divorce cause you have no respect for yourself so how can you respect your marriage.
Regardless of who the individual is.
If this man did that to me while my husband was away i would have shot him in the nuts.
Well done!
I realy didn't think it could get any worse after the first one - but you managed it!
ythebadger ... well done
Thanks for your shity comment again. You too managed quite well. Well keep barking like a dog i don't care about dogs
Whats with the dogs?
When they see dogshit like this thats how people react. How old are you 12? Not only is the storyline lousy it is written like a elementary schooler. Badger was right this is worse than the first one
Nonsesnse
on the name of feedback some readers are really behaving like a dogs. author is right to call such people dogs. they indeed are dogs for they don't know what constructive criticism means. only human can provide such criticism not dogs who can't understand human language can just bark. what a waste of time to talk about such people. i will request the author to ignore such animals and continue the story.
let the dog bark for it knew only that much
The comments
here arë amazingly infantile. It's inconceivable that people would want to read ch.2 if they hated ch.1. That's masochism.
The story is very hot. More please, and soon!
Very hot
We can all see where this might be going, but you are drawing it out slowly. Great technique. I can't wait for the next installment!
please continue
love the story line, tired of cockold stories, husbands watching etc. please continue the story to the end and then some.
Compliment
Not complement. " realized how much wet her panty had become." Sounds like english is your second language. Is it? That would be a good excuse.
thanks
Thanks
Awaiting continuation of the story
I like how this story is going. Awaiting the rest of the story
more, more
the start of the story is great, love the build-up. he comes on but just enough to get her wanting more. Ses reluctant but cant help being more and more curious....
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