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GREAT STORY!!!
Loved Mother Madison! Serves George right -- ignoring a hot blooded woman like Rachel. I hope you make a series out of this. After all, Jeff hasn't fucked Tammy yet. Get both of the women pregnant. Maybe introduce an Aunt who is as hot as Rachel.
Excellent
I hope they become her permanent lovers. There's nothing wrong with incest romance and as long as all are consenting adults the law won't get in there way.
It seemed as if it was an abrupt ending leaving a lot of issues hanging ?
Unless there is another chapter coming, the ending was like the author got tired of writing this story and just quit.
Was George actually cheating on her, or was there some other reason that their relationship broke down?
Does Rachel have money of her own, or is she expecting to get a lot of money from George when she finalizes the divorce?
The sex in the story was very erotic and explicit, and it would be nice for another chapter or two of them enjoying loving each other and Rachel catching up on all of the lost time of not having sex with George, but what is going to happen after the family figures out what they were going to do if the divorce actually happens.
I hope to see more soon...
Thanks for the read.
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