All Comments on 'Like Mother Like Son'

Very well written lead-in, with the possibilities of where the story might lead are endless,,,

Thanks for your comment---this is the first time I've let anyone read it, and I'm glad you didn't find it overly boring. It's a lot of internal thoughts, which sometimes I think bogs it down a bit. There are probably about 6 more chapters. I just haven't gotten around to editing them all yet.

what to think about this story,I'm definitely intrigued

i have to at least give next chapter a go, hopefully YOU POST ASAP

I believe this is indeed a very erotic story, how someone can have sexual feelings for a cold hearted mother and the mother feels the same for the son but keeps it a secret and that's the explanation for her strange behaviour. Also, I hope the son submits the mother for been a tease and playing mind games.

P.S. I'll add you as a favorite author because I believe the up coming stories will be a masterpeace and I'm sure I'll enjoy reading it.

Very Inspired & innovative of the author to write about mothers to whom nurturing their children is not their top 5 things on the daily ' to do ' list. I pretty much don't care about the potential tryst or liason between the two main characters. The psychological overtones & ramifications are absorbing enough .

I'm hesitant to critique this because certain aspects.have hit a personal chord. I will say the son is damaged & I wish he was a bit more sympathetic. It is understandable why is he is stuck in his current ' rut '.

where does she get her inspiration? is she fucking around on her wimpy ass hubby at some bdsm club? is she wanting a man that can take charge or is she just an asexual hateful bitch?

on this site!!!

I spent the last 20 minutes reading this only to see it conclude with nothing. This is not fair because, those 20 minutes I will never get back!

my favorite. Your writing is magnetic.

Stop reading.....This bitch has no intentions of finishing the story!!!

I like your writing style. You do internal pretty well. Didn't really matter if it had a climatic sexual ending because it was interesting even without it. It was also dark, which is fucking awesome. You get a definite five from me.

I like character development in depth and breadth, to include emotionally, physically and psychologically. I like logical plot development. Finally, the interworking of the family unit and/or interworking of the relationships of the major and minor characters is important to a cohesive story. As a reader of mutually consenual incestuous love stories, sex plays a minor role in good stories. Everything which leads up to sex is important; sex is only the icing on the cake.

Well done! 5