Seriously, it's so considerate of you to keep us posted - it's very appreciated. It seems that you have a lot of dedicated fans eagerly awaiting new chapters... :) Thank you for your stories, and I am so looking forward the next chapter!
I most definitely agree with previous comments, the fact that you keep us all informed of progress is so kind and thoughtful.
I'm like refreshing 20 times a day now .... why is literotica so slow ....
What a cliffhanger! Write fast pleaseeeeeee
Can't wait for more! I'm so happy that I stumbled upon your story here. It has me hooked!
I was wondering how you chose Brynna's name. Did you know that in Swedish, 'brinna' means 'to burn'?
Yet literotica makes us wait :( Thanks so much for keeping us up dated, Titania! You're an amazing writer, I'm dying from excitement for the next chapter
I think when I made the name up, it sounded a lot like something that meant brave or corageous, which is exactly what she is. Very interesting fact tho...thanks,
No offense or anything - you're an awesome writer - how much longer till the next installment of the series? Dying to know!
This is my first time in literotica...and this is my first story. I wish all first times could be this exquisite.
The story has reminded me of a sex driven beauty and the beast. I love it! Can't stop reading
Another excellent chapter, and I can now see why Malik behaved the way that he did. But his actions are still entirely inexcusable. You aren't allowed to purposely throw a man in debt, threaten to kill him unless he sells his daughter, use physical/emotional/sexual torture to break someone, and then feel all super sad when she leaves your miserable ass. I love the story, but unless Bryanna leaves Malik or forces him to work insanely hard for any semblance of forgiveness, I may no longer be able to respect her as a heroine. She's already let her lust blind her to his evil. I hope the trend of self delusion does not continue. Five stars, as always.
I understand that Malk brought the women to his bed to humiliate Brynna. What Im a little confused about is what he expected her reaction to be. Dropping the tray and running seemed to surprise him. What did he think she would do?
There were a few too many loose ends tied up all together. I hope if you do a rewrite you spread them out a little more evenly.
I'm liking Malik a little better after this.
I'm so glad Brynna has decided to leave, and still has her resolve to die rather than be with him. Go Brynna! Make him work for it, possibly to no avail. Great to hear his schemes to get her to him in the beginning, I'm surprised she didn't recognise him, though. Although, I guess that speaks of how little he meant for her, or affected her, in their first meeting. The way she spoke to him in front of the little boy was priceless and very well-written, you go girl.
On a different note, the way you wrote out his thoughts about buying her the most exotic flowers etc. to try to make her forgive him was heartbreaking, and made me cry a little.
It's a great story, can't wait to read more. xxx
Anyone wondering 'What was he thinking?' Needs to rethink the question. Hellllooooo, narcissistic control freak here. He was thinking about HIMSELF. He is fundamentally unable to see beyond himself. And to have her crack his shell in such visceral ways would feak him out. Nothing like stirred up crazy.
I have enjoyed your writing and the depth you gave your heroine - particularly in her self awareness that because her body responds it does not necessarily mean she has given complete submission.
I think the flashback and giving the reader insight into his POV really adds to this story,
My only nitpick is that she did not recognize him as the same proud entitled noble from the incident in the village. I can't imagine she would have had many such encounters.
It also makes him incredibly petty to go to such lengths initially to put a poor teenage girl in her place for no other reason then she embarrassed and talked back to him.
But just nitpicks in a well written story! *****
I was completely absorbed into this chapter! It was far my favorite chapter as I have been dying to know what was going inside Malik's head!
...is this twilight fanfiction? not that its not good, just has a familiar tone...
I wish I could give you more than five stars... this story deserves like, 20! I'm a huge fan of your writing.
Wish I could write like this!
So this part is more of Malik's point of view. He hated her guts when she stood up against him when she was in her teens and vowed to make her miserable. So at first he didn't want her sexually, he just wanted revenge but was taken aback when time made her grow into a lovely woman and his obsession turned into lust, is that it?
Twisted guy...lol but hot though and your use of intense words in his POV made me like I want to be claimed by him haha...only in my imaginations though, wouldn't want a guy like that in real life.
Love this chapter again. You are an amazing author and should be novelist.
7 star!!!! good job :D.
Very good writing!
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