All Comments on 'Home Invasion Ch. 02'

Crawl back into your cesspool you slime ridden author.

so very sad..........

the 3 of them should be put down for the sake of humanity.

Obviously Lynn's been wronged by a guy lately and this is her retribution. More power to her. But it's still a WACC story as advertised

As usual, your writing is good. But I don't like any of the characters here and I hate the humiliation that they heap on the husband, who is so pitiful that he doesn't realize he should be humiliated. The original story was headed in that direction, but this sequel carried it to a non-erotic, pathetic, and mean-spirited conclusion. I guess this might turn on some people, but not me.

Good, personal and emotional insights, and hot sex. Not everyone's cup of tea, and I guess the morality police will use you like the Home Invaders did in your story. I assume you are used to that and ignore it.

Interesting to see a woman post a wife-sharing story written from the husbands perspective. There is plenty of men writing from the female view, to varying degrees of success. Not sure there is an appreciation for how difficult and complex that is. Also, your discipline in keeping the voice secluded to him, and allowing the secondary characters to develop through voice, action and observation. Well done, Lynn.

At this point it ceases to be erotic. Just sad Sorry I finished it

Never thought I would see that quote. You write very well but something or someone must have hurt you very deeply to write this.At this point it is non erotic just plain sorry

Jesus! I write a story about a cuckold and some stupid guys say I’ve been badly treated by men and had poor marriage relationships. That’s like saying Hemmingway hated bull-fighters because he wrote about them getting gored or Melville had a whale phobia because he wrote about Moby Dick sinking a ship.

When I write a story about a happy couple (“Bedroom Conversations”) nobody says I had a happy marriage.

Come on guys admit it. You get pissed when my stories touch something in your sexual desires that you are trying desperately to repress!

Sorry but raping a woman or watching my wife get raped isn't part of my hidden sexual desires. I think the first is completely reprehensible and should be punished accordingly; the second is just plain sick.

well written story with some good erotic times. Cockhold not my interest or any fantasy of mine but respect your right to tackle the subject.

the main problem is that you are almost the only author here who writes with no decency and respectfulness towards almost all characters in your stories. this is just a fact. comming to your really outrageous comparison with Hemmingway, everybody knows he was a troubled man who committed suicide. so assuming you have a problem is really not far fetched. get help . literotica is not a self-help group for people like you who have lost the touch with humanity. and of course have lost any point of beeing erotic.

Sorry Lynn your arguement does not hold water. Glad to be raped?? Are you kidding me? You are truly a talented writer but one of the anons said it there are no redeeming qualities in any of your characters Real hard to identify with scum.I read one of your recent stories(Miss Minnie) and thought it was fantastic.Really good. Sorry,I know this is fantasy and hopefully it is fiction but there is no excuse for rape And to be glad it happened? Sorry but......

sick and not at all erotic.

disagree with the author one thing your not hemmingway and did he not kill himself, your stories are sick not entertaining, while not knowing you and hoping i never do your best bet is to leave this genre because it has enough sickos.

The writing skills are impressive. The first chapter was a slightly less awkward topic and the reader here finally gets the reason she was so quick in getting over the personal invasion and into sharing sex (noticed by Hubby)! Hubby's transition into accepting being a cuckold is improbably fast, but helped by an experienced Bull, who likes him, and a strong wife who loves and appreciates him. They are, of course, also satisfying their own agendas, but those do not include beating his spirit down! Not my favorite cuppa tea, but very well done.

will number 3 be out?

Good Story, but I worry about where you will take us.....can they remain in love with each other when she loves Roger's cock so much? Will their marriage survive?

And would rather suck cum from his wife's cunt rather than fuck her.

Was it ever mentioned what was wrong with their son that made Shane get sick, and why didn't Donna become distressed about her son?

All she has said about it was she needed to be fucked for two years.

I think I have to agree with her when she called herself a whore. She is a selfish whore and is only thinking of getting herself fucked by a big cock, A size queen at the best.

A very good second part....but because of the name association would love Joey to come back on the scene...! Anyway, as usual, a well written story..very readable even without the erotic content..but that is 'the icing'...very arousing and throughly enjoyed it. Thank you. Joe

It's a special type of writer who recognises that cuckoldry is not a wife betraying a husband but a wife exploring her own glorious sexual needs while keeping her husband in love with her.

Thank you for sharing.

but troubling.I realize this is a fantasy story but quite honestly the wife getting off on being raped for real is horrible,women can orgasm from rape but they don't do what the wife did hear,where she suddenly enjoys it.A wife who saw her husband gettibg off on her being raped would be betrayed and would walk away.Wose,even though this is a story,it feeds into the crap notion of the religious right that thete is such a thing as real rape and non real rape and that is horseshit.I am with someone who was sexually abused and I see the consequences of it,it just makes the rape aspect in the story that.much worse to me.And while I can appreciate a threesomeI find the fact that the wife allows her husband to be degraded troubling,that to me is a woman who is lying go herself and to him,she basically shows she woukd be willing to.let a jerk like roger hurt her husband for a fat cock,not exactly erotic.Plus roger is no genyleman,if he is screwing wives behind the husbands back and cheating on his own wife he is an ahole.There could be a great story here where roger goes over the line znd shane unleashes the nuclear option but that isn't going to happen,i suspect dhane is going to end up like the judge and his wife is going to go along with it,not so loving

you can dress it up any way you want but it's still called cheating

well written , deep look at some very dificult emotions.

i took the time to read the other comments here & i can see these are extremely painful topics for the majority of people to discuss ,

i wish someone could explain to me why they read these storys if they hate them so much & they find them so deeply painful & torturous to read .

xxxhugsxxx

godbless & be well

Brilliantly written, well constructed paragraphs, and the style are all indicative of a well-above average intellect (that alone is enough to make the haters take to typing at you).

The subject matter was well handled, and unlike the "Phil Phantom" style stories, you masterfully used back and forward stories to fill in the motivation and the justification for the characters to be where they were (Phil stories don't have judgements, they just are. How the characters got into the situation are ignored).

I loved the idea of a man, who had neglected his wife, coming to be aroused by her again. The idea that a man could become erect while watching his wife being raped, is very accurate, the feeling of helplessness and watching the erotic playing out would have that effect on any many given the right combination (the rapist put the knife away, changing from fear of life to fear of arousal).

I love that the Bull, is kind and gentle. He is respectful of the husband and his feelings. Leading or teaching the husband that he can achieve a sexual high from watching, interacting with his wife whilst she is being fucked is accurate, and moving him onto creampie I believe would be rationalized by the husband.

I think the haters and the naysayers can go fuck themselves, for me I give you a ten out of ten.

Thank you for continuing to write

I love this particular type of cuckold story. A wife in love with her husband and when she discovers he loves seeing her fucked, enjoys it with him. The teasing and intimacy are exquisite! Please keep Writing!

She's glad she was raped. That is a low life whore for sure. Hope the rapist doesn't plan to run for office in a few years.

I love your stories do you have any more on other sites or any unpublished

This brain dead pussy should just shoot himself, after he sends the wife to hell.