All Comments on 'My First Hanukkah'

Thanks for sharing that with us.

I felt that it really communicated the excitement of the holidays - with, of course, a LitE bent.

The ninth night was the kicker!

Nicely written. So glad to see a story evolving around Hanukkah.

Erotic without graphic sex scenes. It takes skill to pull that off. Now I will read some of your other submissions.

Now that was fun and well told and NO drama.......I like that

Been reading all types of stories for sometime now but first time felt compelled to comment as it was truly enjoyable and quite a romantic tale, like others i enjoyed the additional 9th night. Well done.

Great read my friend. Thanks for sharing.

Sexy and fun to read -Tks

Even though I am living a bachelor life similar to the one described in the first part of his life, my favorite things to read are plausible love stories. The only problem was reading about fabulous dishes late in the morning, uff da!

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This protagonist I liked Jay. A nice unique look at things with a good story line, and once again very well written.

5/5 nuff said

Awww, that's the best Hanukkah story I've ever read!!