by just_a_bibliomaniac
I will be looking for next instalment. I am really curious where it will go...
... you have done very well - it was most enjoyable. I hope you will consider writing more - this was a real teaser and it deserves to expand.
Well done - four stars.
That's the diffference between a wanna-be and a real bitch!
Always glad to see a female submit this type of story. You express yourself well and would LOVE to read more...please?
A wonderful, arousing story, and a well written one. You did a great job of setting the scene and creating the mood. The next to the last line summarized the whole point of the story "mine". I look forward to more of your lovely stories.
I am sick of seeing asshole comments on this type of story. I liked this story and it was what I enjoy reading. If "anonymous" trolls don't like this type of story, DON'T READ IT!!!!!