All Comments on 'Mosaic of musings'

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Butterflies512Butterflies512over 11 years agoAuthor

The people of missed connections would have hated this one...and I, personally, don't give a crap about their opinions.

DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
Well...

I have no idea who the people of missed connections are, and I can certainly understand not caring when people hate a poem without reason. I don't hate it, but I do think it could benefit from a reworked presentation. You may, however, have reasons for presenting it as you did - e.g.. in short lines, all starting with capitals, and no stanzas. For instance, the short lines give it a breathless feeling - maybe intended to reflect musings. I do like the way you have used rhyme selectively. Just my opinion.

Butterflies512Butterflies512over 11 years agoAuthor
re: Well...

Thanks for your comment...I like the freedom of poetry and used this piece to explore a more freestyle, non-traditional usage of words, rhythms and flow.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
MUSINGS MAKE NO RHYME OR REASON

only the authors input to disseminate, TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
#2 FOR THE BUTTERFLY

I HAVE QUESTIONS....YOUR BIO BLOG IS SKETCHY TO BEING INANE. GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR FUTURE POSTINGS. RESPECTFULLY tk u mlj lv nv

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